Glaring slash doesn't work so that's 6 skill points wasted right there. Also hes looking for a build he can pve with so having no aoe skills isnt smart... Your build is good for pvp but purely lacks in what he asked...
You are right about Glaring Slash, as I said I did not know if its working or not, but if it will be fixed, then its a must have ability. My problem with your build is that you intend do deal mostly physical damage, since you max Flash Slash and MSS, but you take Might over Spirited Roar, which will result in about 20% less damage or even more if you have better weapon.
How about this build then? Link